I hear this is one of your first tracks. Not bad. I especially like the gritty guitar riff at 0:34. I get that this is a mix of two genres but I think it would of worked better if it had more cohesion overall. Keep them coming.

awsome man

hi again last song i left coment but didnt grade the song relized after clicked send so havent herd this song but grade is for your untitled song

i always liked your work and was inspierd by your neatness in a track , i see this ones untitled if i made this song i mighta called it tinkerbell because there are a lota difernt bell sounds yoused altho it being a pc at work if were live you would youse a zilophone to mimic those sounds and of course hire a zilophone player to get it just right nice work