Enjoyable, metered ambient sound with clean lines. Not filled with abundance of creativity, but the discourse is not weak. Enjoyable & chill. The ending cymbals are excellent

First off, i like breaks. I had a number of mp3s set up and when this one came up, i immediately took notice. The playful sounds (like a happy apple) with the stright forward breaks worked very well, the breakdown with the guitar is a nice touch that adds a 2nd stretching pad effect. I think the layering was nicely done, but a bit hurried. the ending also seemed to be quite abrupt, but a lovely song nonetheless. I suggest a little resturcturing and lenghtening.

Exceptionally tight production, nothing gets boring here, no sharp corners to poke eyes out with. Sounds ready to shrink wrap, to me. the control of waveforms is accomplished and the ideas are followed through gracefully. There was a bar here or there that felt a bit bulky, but when i hear thins kind of music, i'm apt not to rip it apart technically, instead let it flow. This moves like a silent shimmer for your ears. You should probably have this a listen.

When it comes to integrating acid into tracks, i'm fairly fickle. I mean once one goes off on Drax by Heckmann, it's hard to hear it any other way. I like the steady use here, but it feels more of an after thought to the actual track which is all about breaks. Too much genre integration here with little for cohesion, but the sounds & ideas are decent overall. I like the breakbeat trance style, so this gets a plus from me there. This song just feels scattered, and almost gets me off. High potential

Long intro, first change over at 2 minutes, no distinct voices, recorded too loud, if the layers were added a bit more intricately, with some build, the tension would be present, you might want to work on that. the levels all seem to be the same for all the voices. it's a bit hard to listen to, but with time, the sound could tighten up. the 2nd change-over at 5 minutes was needed, the first warble was nice, but otherwise this sounds like someone on the local church organ. my suggestion would be to repeat a few of the motices found from the 6 minute mark onward, as they are relatively nice, and again, put some attention onto building the emotion/voice content. a bit too harsh to listen to, experiment more